I love Ure ad, and that's a really cute voice for a lil gurl. And it's really easy to understand too. You mention about it at the beginning of the ad. And your music get people attention too. I like your sound effects, music, and your group's clear voices. But the last voice I think is from Tom. I wasn't really clear. Your ad is awesome, I think there's no need to change anything.
Your add was fantastic, with the seller, the girl, and the mom. Editing and transitioning was great, follow up each sentence, background music was fit into the add. One think I didn't like was the voice at the end. I didn't understand it, maybe you could change it. If this was real, it would be attracted with the written script and the flawless editing. I would buy one too.
I like your sound Darlene, its very good. Its really good for advertising your product. Some of the voice in the ads is Darlene voice but change the pitch so that really good. Some of it i don't understand like your voice and Darlene are kind of the same so can't reconigze whom voice is it but great job on the ads.
I think that the purpose of this ad is to sell the WOW coton candy. I think that the way they presented their coton candy is really good because it includes humor, and it's very simple to understand. I think that the audience for this advertisement are little children age 5-8. I think that the transition was really good, especially the transition from the sound to the voice at the beginning. I also liked the little gir's voice because it sounded realistic and it's really funny. Finally, I liked the ending line because it is very catchy and short. I think that the last part of the ad when the guy speaks, it's kind of hard to understand because the voice is so low. Definately my suggestion is to change the guys voice at the end to make it easier to understand.
- The purpose of this ad is to sell cotton candy, this ad fulfil the purpose. The audiences are kids. - Darlene's and Olia's voice sound so similar, I can't identify who is the mother and who is the seller. - I like the sound effect (ice cream car, maybe?). It fit well with the purpose to sell cotton candy. - Everything went a bit fast, I think you should slow down a bit.
Suggestion: I think the ad should tell where the cotton candy was sell and prize too.
I think you're ad really fulfill the purpose. I think you intended audience are young little girls, and you really attracted me into your ad. I don't think there are anything that didn't work so well in this ad, I like the changes in the voices, it's sounds very good. I think Tom's part should be improve, because his pronunciation isn't very good.
i really like your ad and the voice too. Y'all sure know how to make the people benefit to buy the WOW cotton candy. i think it was a great job to mesmerize young children. :D. i really like the music, it fit in with the ad. Nothing really went wrong but i think you shud tell the audience where to buy it and the cost. Gr8.
Really funny. I like how you guys edit the sound. I also like the line when you tell the benefit of the WoW cotton candy. It's really attractive for the kids. I think you guys should make the last part better. Great job.
I love Ure ad, and that's a really cute voice for a lil gurl. And it's really easy to understand too. You mention about it at the beginning of the ad. And your music get people attention too. I like your sound effects, music, and your group's clear voices. But the last voice I think is from Tom. I wasn't really clear. Your ad is awesome, I think there's no need to change anything.
ReplyDeleteYour add was fantastic, with the seller, the girl, and the mom. Editing and transitioning was great, follow up each sentence, background music was fit into the add. One think I didn't like was the voice at the end. I didn't understand it, maybe you could change it. If this was real, it would be attracted with the written script and the flawless editing. I would buy one too.
ReplyDeleteI like your sound Darlene, its very good. Its really good for advertising your product. Some of the voice in the ads is Darlene voice but change the pitch so that really good. Some of it i don't understand like your voice and Darlene are kind of the same so can't reconigze whom voice is it but great job on the ads.
ReplyDeleteI think that the purpose of this ad is to sell the WOW coton candy. I think that the way they presented their coton candy is really good because it includes humor, and it's very simple to understand. I think that the audience for this advertisement are little children age 5-8. I think that the transition was really good, especially the transition from the sound to the voice at the beginning. I also liked the little gir's voice because it sounded realistic and it's really funny. Finally, I liked the ending line because it is very catchy and short. I think that the last part of the ad when the guy speaks, it's kind of hard to understand because the voice is so low. Definately my suggestion is to change the guys voice at the end to make it easier to understand.
ReplyDelete- The purpose of this ad is to sell cotton candy, this ad fulfil the purpose. The audiences are kids.
ReplyDelete- Darlene's and Olia's voice sound so similar, I can't identify who is the mother and who is the seller.
- I like the sound effect (ice cream car, maybe?). It fit well with the purpose to sell cotton candy.
- Everything went a bit fast, I think you should slow down a bit.
Suggestion: I think the ad should tell where the cotton candy was sell and prize too.
I think you're ad really fulfill the purpose. I think you intended audience are young little girls, and you really attracted me into your ad. I don't think there are anything that didn't work so well in this ad, I like the changes in the voices, it's sounds very good. I think Tom's part should be improve, because his pronunciation isn't very good.
ReplyDeletei really like your ad and the voice too. Y'all sure know how to make the people benefit to buy the WOW cotton candy. i think it was a great job to mesmerize young children. :D. i really like the music, it fit in with the ad. Nothing really went wrong but i think you shud tell the audience where to buy it and the cost. Gr8.
ReplyDeleteReally funny. I like how you guys edit the sound. I also like the line when you tell the benefit of the WoW cotton candy. It's really attractive for the kids. I think you guys should make the last part better. Great job.
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